only smell remains
And the sudden smell interrupts me. I look frantically around and in the crowd looking for you as the afternoon sun sets lazily behind the mrt station walls.Was it you or your shadow? Was it anybody or it was nobody?
It was just your smell.
in my mind.
The same old smell of the perfume u always used.
You are gone yet the smell remains and it would.
Until memories fade.
And as I walk along the riverside I can smell it again.
Was it you or your shadow? Was it anybody or it was nobody?
Nah it wasn’t you.
Just your smell.
in my mind.
posted by tongueofsilence @ 11:52 PM
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wotever u wrote almost made me cry.U know it from da begining how bad i am wid words...how u described what u feel is incredible...im in so damn love with him but i cud never express in dis way....n i truely understand wat u mean by "literaly" having his smell arnd u.COZ I HAVE!! it doesnt even take time to think and fantasize abt him, all of a sudden out of no where i feel it....its him.
whos dat who commented?? stupid he sounds.
Shut up "you know who".. atleast i criticised on what she wrote unlike you who juzz knows how to "butter up" the writer
oh shut up.who da **** r u?? huh? shes my best friend,n none of u wud kno how much i kno her...n das not called butering up u moron.im tellin her how shes so good at describing wot she feels, cos i cudnt thou feeling the same about the one we love.
now u get lost. or tell me who u are.
what khan? u have turned into a poet.sounds good.
anoymous is right.love doesnt exist.i'll explain to u at the next meeting, if ur interested i.e.